Monday, March 18, 2013

Chill out

      Marijuana for recreational use needs to be made legal. The truth about marijuana is coming to the light more and more everyday. The movie  "Reefer Madness" (1936) was a ridiculous way of demonizing the wonderful plant which has done virtually no harm to anyone. Can we just make it legal and get it over with? I mean come on, if alcohol and ciggarettes are "legal" then why isn't marijuana? According to The American Cancer Society, since 2002 50 million people have died from the use of tobacco and "If trends continue, one billion people will die from tobacco use and exposure during the 21st century, or roughly one person every six seconds"(Castillo 3). The CDC (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention) reports that in the United States 25,692 have died from alcohol induced deaths, not including accidents and homicides in 2012. Another 15,990 people have died that same year from alcoholic liver disease. How many people has the evil marijuana killed? 1 million? 10 million? A billion? Actually, there has not been one single reported case of somebody dying from smoking marijuana.

      As far as I have noticed, school systems and many government officials will have you believe that marijuana is as bad as crack cocaine and heorine, but I am noticing a shift in many people's awareness towards this so called "evil-plant" and people are waking up to the true and false facts about marijuana everyday. "Despite more than 70 years of federal marijuana prohibition, Americans’ consumption of and demand for cannabis is here to stay. It is time for state lawmakers to acknowledge this reality" (Armentano). The lawmakers need to pull their heads out of their butts and face the reality of this marijuana being illegal situation. Fore once they pull their already tiny narrowly-minded noggins out of their pompously tight butts and clear away the fecal matter which has stringently worked its way through their corneas all the way through to their optic nerves which inturn has further hindered their obviously flawed ability to reason, they will come to realize that people like to smoke weed and they can not stop them from doing so.

      People should not be deprived of their freedom for recreationally using this wonderful plant. About 755,000 people were arrested in 2011 for marijuana possession, that means "that marijuana users were arrested last year at a rate of one every 42 seconds" (Webster 2). Some folks like to drink a beer when they get off of work, some like to smoke a ciggarette when their day is done, and others would simply like to smoke a joint when they get off of work without having to worry about having their freedom stripped away from them because a guy in a suit says its not okay. Life is short, toke up. I do not mean live only for the sole purpose of smoking marijuana, but a few hits of a joint every now and then will not kill you. Neither will a couple bong rips. Thus this wonderful plant and people's clear and present demand for it, deserve much more appreciation and respect than they currently receive.


Armentano, Paul, NORML Deputy Director Maryland, Lawmakers To Debate Marijuana Legalization Bill Tomorrow March 18, 2013

Castillo, Michelle. "Tobacco use claimed 6 million lives in 2011, report shows." CBSnews . Web. 25 Mar. 2013. http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-504763_162-57401584-10391704/tobacco-use-claimed-6-million-lives-in-2011-report-shows/.
 
 
Webster, Stephen C. "America’s 2011 drug war tally: One marijuana arrest every 42 seconds." The Raw Story 29 Oct. 2012. Web. 25 Mar. 2013. http://www.rawstory.com/rs/2012/10/29/americas-2011-drug-war-tally-one-marijuana-arrest-every-42-seconds/  


7 comments:

  1. I like your topic man. Even though I don't smoke i I still agree that it should legalized you make some very strong arguments. And good quote as well.

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  2. Topic Sentence: Your topic should be more specific about what you will talk about, not what you think people should do.

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    Strong argument: The argument is clear.

    One compliment: It looks like you chose a topic that you a lot about, which is good. You will be able to say a lot about it.

    One suggestion: Try to use more facts instead of own opinion.

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  3. Thanks Keisha, I did not realize that I used pretty much all opinion and no facts. I will revise it with facts and I will break it down into paragraphs.

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  4. Topic sentence – Your topic is clear, but you should specify it even further as to what you plan on explaining about marijuana.
    Support – Most of your blog is opinionated. You should find more factual support.
    Transitions – Splitting this into paragraphs would make transitioning easier.
    Quote (in "quote sandwich" format with proper MLA citation) – That was a good quote from your citation.
    Grammar and spelling: The grammar and spelling was fine, but the post should be made more formal. You write as you’re talking.
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    One suggestion: Try using more facts and information in your post.

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  5. Thanks for the feedback. I will work on it and post a revised version. I will get some facts in there.

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  6. Topic sentence- just reading the topic sentence, the reader can tell that you can are in favor of legal marijuana
    Support- you proved your topic with opinion but not with facts/statistics
    Transitions- might want to add more to make it flow
    Quote- your quote fit your blog topic well.
    Grammar/Spelling- it was good but might want to sound more official
    Strong argument- after reading your blog, i can tell that your are passionate about this issue.
    I like your title it brings the reader in and add facts.

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  7. Topic Sentence: You need to be more specific and your sentence needs to have more clarity.

    Support: You need to find legit support instead of stating opinions.

    Transitions: Include paragraphs and transitioning words.

    Quote: Good quote!

    Grammar and spelling: Use more formal language.

    Strong argument: Great argument.

    One compliment: Nice topic ;)

    One suggestion: Try making it a bit more interesting + detail oriented.

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